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bad girl (an attempt at free verse)
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bad girl (an attempt at free verse) |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
bad,girl. (hehe...couldn't resist) Actually, I would have to have this one explained to me. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Elvira - Did you read my "I AM lost and foundering without my rhyme"? I hereby give you special permission to write a rhyming poem ... no matter what those free versers say........  |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
I always feel so simple minded when I read free verse and don't understand a word of it! It sounds, however, like this poem is saying something really, really insightful. It "feels" like a poem about the carefree infatuated feeling. But don't ask me to explain why it feels like that! I like it! |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Huh? |
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