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utopianangel New Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 3Arizona |
I am mad. Furious and crazy Take my life Relieve me kill me No thought triggers happiness Dead lost I am nothing. Trapped in mind Thirsty in heart Love fails Always it disappears Seeking love Impossible love Illusion delusion Hallucination of love I am mad. ------------------ Rachel |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
I like the way this poem starts and ends on the same note.. the reader brought to more of an understanding by the end. It's a cynical piece, true.. but definitely full of things I've thought of myself. -C |
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