| Open Poetry #1 |
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Tears Into A Pillow |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
The stains are there, they won't wash away tears into a pillow in fragile array Soaked into linen smothered by night tears into a pillow unseen by light No sound accompanies but the silence is loud tears into a pillow midnight rain cloud Sleep finally comes in the small hours of dark tears into a pillow have left their mark Yet peace won't appear in eyes which have cried tears into a pillow for love that has died When daylight is over and sunshine is gone tears into a pillow continue on… caroline all rights reserved ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Simple, yet truly poignant - I enjoyed this one very much..... ![]() |
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Elizabeth![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ditto Nan's comment-so many times have there been tears in my pillow, and they don't always bring peace. Well spoken, Caroline. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thank you both...your responses are so appreciated! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
The thought was well expressed! I have to join the club with the tears in my pillow too! well done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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