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Open Poetry #1

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Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 1999-08-29 02:09 PM

Vulnerability hiding
behind the darkness of shadows,
lurking in the black of night,
Safe from the warmth that tries to touch you.

A secret chamber
to which only few may enter.
Slowly, you welcome them
into the recesses of your heart.

Your soul: a maze
into the dregs of humanity.
Some get lost
and never find their way.

A special few
you will lead and guide.
Taking them beyond
the locked gates.

Welcoming them into your hell
Letting them bring their sun to you.
Glorying in their rays.
*****

for you, my friend

Gentle Soul
Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

1 posted 1999-08-29 02:50 PM

This is a good poem..

nicely written

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

2 posted 1999-08-29 04:14 PM

thank you, gentle soul. i've been told it's not totally accurate, but it is my perception. :-)

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-08-29 11:51 PM

Though true that this is not entirely accurate, you peg me well enough. I'm flattered to be the subject of your verse, my dear. Thank you.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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