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Open Poetry #1

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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

0 posted 1999-08-30 09:56 PM

Pain delves beneath each layer;
True, it burrows deep within;
Sure it sifts the soul - then finer
-For it seeks the best therein;

It takes its precious treasures
-Then it tends them o'er the flame;
By the crucible it hovers;
Purest silver is its aim.

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Denise

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-08-31 02:22 AM

Hmmm - very mysterious! This could be interpreted in many ways. It makes me think of alchemy (althought that's gold not silver). Anyway, I really like it.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-08-31 11:49 PM

Thank you Severn, I'm glad you liked it.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

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3 posted 2004-04-17 01:44 PM

awesome piece

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