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My mixed emotions
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My mixed emotions |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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I know the syllable count isn't great. But it reflects how I feel right now! It's all mixed up! You left me tangled emotions! And hurt from angry notions! Words...what a poweful potion! My intention was not to cause you pain! It was not done for selfish gain! ----------------- I want to share your pain, And your happiness too. I want to be there for you, In all that you go through! I merely want to be your friend, That'll be there till the very end! ------------------ All I can give is my heart! And that is all of me! [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 08-31-99).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You have nothing to apologize for. This is a very touching piece. Michael |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you sweet Michael!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
WhtDove: You captured the frustration of wanting to be there for someone who says "no thanks" very well... I like it! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Suthern! [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 08-31-99).] |
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