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Missing Anna
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Missing Anna |
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owen Junior Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 19Toledo, WA USA |
It was a normal day Just like any other It was the day that I met you Soon to be my lover You asked me for directions To one of your class rooms I walked you down that high school hall Where your sweet scent still looms I had to ask you for your name I just knew we’d be together But as I found out later on It was not to be forever I loved to hear your joyful laughter When you were around I think that is what I miss most That oh so joyful sound I remember laying down beside you And enjoying your presence for hours And all I’m able to do now Is bring you occasional flowers Oh why did that horrible saddening day Ever have to come to pass When I found out that the last time We were together would be our last I still think a lot about you And visit you when I can But in my dreams its not the same As holding you in my hands At night when I think about you And I realize you’ve been gone for years The memories can become to much And I moisten my pillow with tears Maybe one day I’ll see you again As you were long ago Possibly at the gates of heaven I miss you sweet Anna Moe |
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Sic New Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 8brisbane,qld,australia |
well written man.i to have had a loved one leave me, not as in the same sense as you though, yet it hurts so much. |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
Very well done, I really enjoyed reading it. I, too, can identify with the feeling of lost love, and I think you captured the feelings eloquently. ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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owen Junior Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 19Toledo, WA USA |
thank you all for your beautiful coments. when all else seems dreary we can always rely on the words of poets to give us a smile. Owen |
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