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Last Summer |
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Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
If I'm still for long enough I remember last summer I ache when I still feel How your touch smoothed my skin If I dream at night I remember last summer How content I was knowing That you were so near to me. If I see your picture I remember last summer And cry, wishing I could Somehow have you back with me. When I close my eyes I remember last summer And I can see your eyes Still peering into mine. If i am alive I'll always remember last summer, Because I had all I needed When you were with me. ------------------ www.auburn.edu/~fergum1 ~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~ |
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Haskins Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 85Dallas, TX |
I like your poem. ------------------ William Haskins http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm |
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Alysia Junior Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 35american falls, idaho usa |
It makes me stop breathing until the last word is uttered and only then can I sigh. You're poem is so beautiful and content that I feel as if I'm sitting under a summer sky with the one I love and remembering all that made me fall in love with him. Thanks. ------------------ ~ Alysia* |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I love everything you write, I wonder why the Summer ended, and how you became so sad. |
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Nimrod the Hunter Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 60 |
Beautiful, very beautiful. You have a strong sense of imagery which I admire. |
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