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Open Poetry #1

you

speare
Junior Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 12
roanoke, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-06-28 03:48 AM

you are who i think about
when i lie alone at night.
your face is all i see
when i close my eyes.
my love for you is real
and it gets stronger every day.
my heart beats out of my chest
when you chance to walk my way.
i long for your kiss,
the thought makes me quiver.
you can trust me when i say
i'll love you forever.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 1999-07-26 02:45 PM

Very good, Speare. This is a great description of a common situation. I liked it a lot!

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