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Open Poetry #1

It's hers

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

0 posted 1999-06-29 05:34 PM

My mind is a blur
With all the words
That come and stir
An inner purr
which then concurs
My heart is hers

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 1999-06-29 06:07 PM

You are obviously in Love. Good for you and I felt this poem was short, but oh so sweet.

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

2 posted 1999-06-29 07:46 PM

not quite in love lost dreamer, but maybe one day, hopefully. she is very special to me. This is more in mind for my future bride than the young lady i am currently involved with. Maybe it will be for her, but not quite yet. Thanx for the comment.

Jfreak

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

3 posted 1999-06-29 10:37 PM

Lovely. Well, whomever "she"...turns out to be..."she" certainly will be...very lucky.
Very pretty poem.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-06-29 10:40 PM

purr-fection, JFreak!

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