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Open Poetry #1

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Raven
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

0 posted 1999-06-30 01:27 AM

Is that you gazing at the stars?
In awe of the beauty of the night?
The moon, so pale and bloodless
Is a vampire that roams in the dark.
Kneeling on your lawn, mesmerized
Do you ever feel that the stars are stealing you away?
I can feel them grasping my soul
Wishing I was somewhere else.
Make a wish, don't be afraid
If it comes true then you will know
That when the day of your death comes
You will forever grace the night sky.

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

WhenDovesCry
Junior Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 16
California, USA

1 posted 1999-06-30 01:51 AM

i am in total awe....this expresses so much and is so beautiful...thank you for sharing it...

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-06-30 02:32 AM

I am astounded by the depth of your verse, please, continue.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

Moonlight
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

3 posted 1999-06-30 02:36 AM

beautiful!

Raven
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

4 posted 1999-06-30 06:27 PM

Thank you for your kind words

this poem is unfinished, until the remaining verses come to me.

*~*Raven*~*

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

Deanna
New Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 7
WV, USA

5 posted 1999-06-30 10:20 PM

I can't wait until the other verses arrive! This is beautiful.

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