Fire of Love....Ash of Us.

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Open Poetry #1

Fire of Love....Ash of Us.

Alysia
Junior Member

since 1999-06-26

Posts 35
american falls, idaho usa

0 posted 1999-07-03 02:59 AM

Raging inferno
compulsive desire
wrath of unexplainable torture
you are mine

Knotted rope
fraying string
blood seeping from every pore
I scream out

Lonely solitude
concluding end
my eyes burn red
we were...
quite a lovely....
Sin

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~ Alysia*

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-03 03:01 AM

Sippets of Darkness like this are a pleasure, please continue.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

2 posted 1999-07-03 08:38 PM

Intense, like it!

Alysia
Junior Member

since 1999-06-26

Posts 35
american falls, idaho usa

3 posted 1999-07-04 12:19 PM

thanks.

even though this isn't my usual writing. just kinda fell onto the page.

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~ Alysia*

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 1999-07-04 12:41 PM

Loved it! "We were quite a lovely sin".. now that's a great line!!!

Lil Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 21

5 posted 1999-07-04 02:06 AM

Awesome....keep up the great writing....

Alysia
Junior Member

since 1999-06-26

Posts 35
american falls, idaho usa

6 posted 1999-07-05 01:43 PM

thanks again.

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~ Alysia*

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