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Open Poetry #3

As a tulip by a pond...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-23 01:15 AM

As a tulip by a pond
Glues its roots to its reflection
Lipstick sticks two lips together
In a bond of their affection

Lips did meet and froze their pose
Eyes are closed and years are passing
But as they separate their grasping
Water smears, and love is lost

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-23 04:45 AM

Liked this one.Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-23 10:53 AM

Interesting, nice imagery. I liked it, but wonder if love is lost all together or just in the face of the pond?

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-10-23 11:21 AM

Master,
Beautifly simple. Well done.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-10-23 12:37 PM

Thanks everybody!
Hoot, that's for the reader to decide as for me personally, time will tell. THanks

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

5 posted 1999-10-23 05:27 PM

Master: I don't wear lipstick, well I try but I keep nibbling it off...ooops

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-10-23 10:00 PM

I'll go with just in the face of the pond!
(I tend to be an optimist!) This is very good Master!

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Denise

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

7 posted 1999-10-23 11:36 PM

Really lovely, I truly enjoyed this!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

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