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RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-10-23 01:30 AM

The tide rolls in,
To greet the din,
Caused by the death of day.
And here I sit,
Forstalling it,
I still have to play
Upon the strings
Of day-bright dreams
And wings of sunset hosts.
And the song I'll sing
To you I'll bring;
To the one I love the most.

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Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-10-23 01:40 AM

Beautiful little song. Has a good flow to it. I love the line:

Upon the strings
Of day-bright dreams

Well done.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-23 04:53 AM

Liked this much! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-10-23 09:58 AM

Your work is very interesting, RSE - I'm looking forward to reading more...

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

4 posted 1999-10-23 02:29 PM

You just got the compliment of all compliments from Miss Nan herself!! (ahem) She happens to be quite picky as she is a teacher, and a darn good nit-pick on poetry too! hehe
As I'm learning quickly myself, your poetry has a really interesting story behind it....I see your thoughts run deep too.....BRAVO! I also look forward to more of your posts !!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-10-23 05:55 PM

Another beauty!

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Denise

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

6 posted 1999-10-23 06:27 PM

Something I'd like to sing along to!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

7 posted 1999-10-23 06:29 PM

Thanks guys, for making me feel at home.

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On the wings of day-bright dreams...

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