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Where are You?
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Where are You? |
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DanMc Junior Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 10Canada |
Where Are You? How long must I search? Oh, lonely heart of mine? Or am I doomed to write sad poems that rhyme? What else can I do, when you Start pounding? If I do nothing, then I'm left waiting. So many times I've followed you, In search of my fait. Where could you be, my friend, my lover, And soulmate. ------------------ Daniel McIntosh |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice. I could feel the longing in this one!  ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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