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Open Poetry #3

A spark Afterall..

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-25 06:48 PM

i dont need this
dont want this
cant have this
will drop this
depression
to end
a suffering
of the mind
rushing
makes all blind
so i will now
leave all it behind
reborn the crime
and let some one else
stand in this crowded
dense,unsatisfying line.
and start to see my spark
after all
never guessed
i had it all along
never left me
was never gone..

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Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

1 posted 1999-10-25 06:59 PM

Amen jackal! Like this mucho!

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal

thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

2 posted 1999-10-26 12:21 PM

may that spark grow into a phenomenal flame!
good work Jackal.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-26 04:25 AM

Liked this much!! Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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