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Open Poetry #3

Counting Coup

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-10-27 08:46 PM

Counting Coup

Death be not my victory
nor wounds my Medal of Honor.
For I touched you
to show that I could
and would..
should
you ever forget
that I counted coup
on you.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-27 11:49 PM

Nicely done.Liked this much.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

2 posted 1999-10-28 12:11 PM

Wow, gee, where do you guys learn to write like this? Boy your gifted.

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

3 posted 1999-10-28 07:59 AM

Thanks...I am self-taught or something.

PS: not everyone thinks I am gifted....just ask the "poet" who sent me a virus!! hehehehe

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 1999-10-28 09:13 AM

I like this very much...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-16 07:26 PM

sigh

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