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sweetest sunset
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sweetest sunset |
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candace Junior Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 14los angeles, california |
glistening water drops, drizzle deep beneath my soul mystical memoirs of colors, shattering the dark light vividly speaking, he walks closer to me glancing in my direction, causing a motion of satisfaction softness of his kiss, wetness of his embrace quivering insanity, echoing,defiantly within touch of his hand, slowly shadowing my face the longest touch, the sweetest embrace |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
To me, I see two lovers..embracing amidst the darkness of night during a summer storm. Is that correct? I like the imagery.  |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
This one deserves another go around...nice imagery, good feeling. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree with Sally, Watcher and Julie, very lovely! ------------------ Denise |
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