| Open Poetry #3 |
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Just Hold On Michael |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston
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She’ll be back, she will! I know! ![]() Deep in my heart it tells me so. ![]() Do not fret my gentle friend ![]() a love like yours just shouldn’t end. ![]() I’ll write to her and ask her why ![]() if she is gone where was goodbye? ![]() I’m sure that she will soon return ![]() through my letter, of your hurt, she’ll learn. ![]() And I will tell her its not fair ![]() to treat you like she doesn’t care. ![]() For I have emails that I’ve saved ![]() that do not mirror how she’s behaved. ![]() She claimed she loved you once or twice ![]() and the way she’s treating you isn’t nice. ![]() To make you sit with constant pain ![]() no word from her makes you insane. ![]() I’ll send the emails I have read ![]() I’ll hold her to the things she said. ![]() So please hold on a little while ![]() I’ll try to comfort you with smiles. ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 10-02-1999).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like the poem Lucie and I like that you care enought to want to help Michael out. We do not know all the details here, but I'm sure there is a reason for what's happening.. sometimes people do things they think are best for everyone. Again, you did an excellent job here - and I like all the happy faces! ![]() |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Lucie how sweet of you to write to cheer, the smiles I'm sure will reach the miles, as your kindness shines as bright as the sun. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
So you want to fix the world? You could, too! Got a good start with cute one. Made me smile!!!!!!!!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
![]() Too sweet! I'll add a few of my own! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Thanks Lucie, A few smiles make all the difference in the world. Thank you too Devine and chris. ![]() ------------------ Michael Anderson I could not love except where Death Was mingling his with Beauty's breath - Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny Were stalking between her and me. EAP |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hmmn, don't know how I missed this one! But anyway it is so sweet it has to back to the top! ![]() |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
You're so sweet Lucie. : ) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I have been dealing with my own issues, but still do I want you to hold on my friend. Thank you Lucie for this verse. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
couldn't do this now...we are only allowed 5 smilies ![]() |
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