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Open Poetry #3

Grieving

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-11-01 05:41 PM

Bleeding Heart

When the bleeding
of the heart
is washed away
by tears
and the grieving ends
then life,
as suddenly as it stopped,
begins again.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-11-01 08:06 PM

One would like to think so.
Short and very sweet.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-01 08:15 PM

Yes, when the grieving ends. Nicely done.

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Denise

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

3 posted 1999-11-01 08:40 PM

yep....you have to grieve first

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-11-01 09:08 PM

You've said a mouth full with few words. Very well said my friend! You're right, we do have to greive first.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-11-01 09:50 PM

Wow, so few words, so much said...nicely spoken

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

6 posted 1999-11-02 02:54 AM

I would love to believe this...nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-04-25 10:41 PM

does it?

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