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An Unpoetic Poem Because it Felt Appropriate
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An Unpoetic Poem Because it Felt Appropriate |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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Needed to remove this at this time. Sorry. [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 11-05-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Severn and quite poetic! ------------------ Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You think so? Cool! Thanks denise.  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Her  throbs for Christopher. I love it Severn, great one, no ryhme needed. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Severn...this is wonderful. It flows so smoothly like a gentle stream to the very end. I think it's great. Now take your bow |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
One of the most beautiful poems I have ever seen.Very well done!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
AWWWW!!!! How lovely.....so heartwarming! ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, yep, yep! ------------------ Denise |
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Thunder Moomba Junior Member
since 1999-10-30
Posts 21Baldwin Park, CA, USA |
This is a pretty great poem Severn ------------ "The stars my shine to night, But will they shine tomarrow?" -Jr. Rodrigo M. Daz_ |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Beautiful. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
LOVELY!!!! & BEAUTIFUL!!!! ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So very beautiful Severn..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Definately a song of the soul. Purely poetic. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it, you will land among the stars.~Les Brown~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You spoke volumes, don't need rhyme or reason, the love you have and you portrayed is enough ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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