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Open Poetry #3
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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-11-04 10:27 PM

you opened up your
heart opened up
and swalloed
you
whole world
starting at
me and my
troubles take you
down from this
place amongst the
stars fade
slowy dying
i have died
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
desperado
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since 1999-05-24
Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx
1 posted 1999-11-08 03:05 PM

interesting, yet it was too disjunctured to taje any real meaning out of this. keep at it. try to be creative with your works.
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