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Dappled Grey
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Dappled Grey |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Dappled grey my lover's eye winks And eye to eye a fragile memory is born Amidst the wreckage of prior romance shorn Dancing to the tune of silvered droplet plinks. Dusty rose my lover's lips purse And lip to lip a growing memory stands Takes heated iron in hand and my heart brands; The pain of ectasy does bless and curse. Driven snow my lover's skin yields And skin to skin a virile memory alive Brings us closer; waxing passions derive; Memory a monolith to us and love builds. Eyes and lips and skin does she possess But never with these will she me bless. Alicat the persnikitty [This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 10-04-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOW!!! Need I say more?? ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Poet Lady New Member
since 1999-10-04
Posts 7 |
I like this, dear, has an old world feel to it. Like the rhyming sequence you used. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Is it wrong to say "Awesome"? Welp, too late, my dear. The deed is done. Now, I do have a silly question...Is this form a "sonnet" perhaps? (Still learning hehehe) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
and another one  19 ? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aw Ali...bring this back to Open...it needs to be seen again... |
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