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Poetic Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Poetic Haiku They want stylish context and form No matter substance And therefore, missing the message. 6 October, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
a poigniant piece......good work Sunshine..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Pepper... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Got the message, but an 8 5 8 haiku is new to me. What ever, I enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, is Haiku only supposed to be 7/5/7? I can adapt... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-06-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
i thought haiku was 5/7/5 i could be wrong |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Help, we have a rampant Haiku running around. Which is correct, 7/5/7 or 5/7/5? |
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