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Teen Poetry #2

I Get Lost

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-01-29 07:36 PM

I get lost inside of you
Your love's so overwhelming

I get lost inside your eyes
They're just so compelling

I get lost inside your arms
You hold me so dear

I get lost inside your words
They all sound so sincere

I get lost inside your smile
It shows just how you feel

I get lost inside of you
To the point that it's unreal.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

eve_angel
Junior Member

since 2000-01-22

Posts 23
Australia

1 posted 2000-01-29 08:03 PM

Really sweet. Great poem.

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

2 posted 2000-01-30 01:58 AM

Beautiful poem....it's really sweet. I love the way you put it.

Salooma

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

3 posted 2000-01-30 10:01 AM

Sweet poem, it is no nice and light and descriptive. Keep writing and keep

Singer1981
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

4 posted 2000-01-30 02:30 PM

Really great poem! Very sweet, yet simple and too the point.

Keep it up!
~Sarah

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-01-30 06:22 PM

I loved your poem. I can relate to such feelings. Good job.

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

6 posted 2000-01-30 06:30 PM

smore: this is beautiful... i love the final lines most of all... i actually have no criticisms or amendments to make to this one (for once)... keep up the beautiful work...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with the blue thumb

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

7 posted 2000-01-30 06:40 PM

Thank you all of you for such positive replies.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

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