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ryun Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33elsinore, ca, usa |
I write to learn my thoughts.. I think to understand a plot Do we see? What others may see? Or do we try, and fail with pride. Locking out, shuting down. Never cry.. With a straight face I glide right by From side to side It's what we call male pride..? |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Me like. Nice poem, of course. To the point, too, which is something I rather enjoy. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I like this poem, too. In the message I recieved from your poem, I see that it's good for people to have some pride, but not to overdo it. Keep posting your poems, and I'll keep reading them. "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ahhh... Carpe Diem! I too had the same imprestion as angel6917. Good job. |
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