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Teen Poetry #2

I miss

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-02-05 11:11 PM

I miss sweet whispers in my ears
I miss you there to wipe my tears

I miss you holding me when I'm sad
Or cheering me up when I feel bad

I miss sweet things you'd always do
But most of all I just miss being with you

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

1 posted 2000-02-05 11:20 PM

smore: simple, sweet, and too the point... very good work

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

2 posted 2000-02-06 02:21 AM

very nice.. a great deal of sadness even in such a short poem. I like it
April

...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant,
And there it goes, I think I found my best friend...

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

3 posted 2000-02-06 08:05 AM

Great poem....it's short, sweet, and simple.

Salma

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