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Teen Poetry #2

alone in the world

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-02-18 07:33 PM

i wrote this several years ago, before i was introduced to god and to the church

i just want to die,
in the sun, i'll fry.

close friends have given up,
left alone with just my pup.

nobody really cares,
diving alone i see flares.

i'll have some fun,
with a gun.

with a bullet in the head,
i'll be lying on the floor dead.

they act like its all my falut,
i'll lock my seld in a vault.

never to to heard from again...

"Yes, I think 'toast' is an appropriate description."
-Jaya Ballard, Task Mage

Ophelia Speaks
Junior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 11
suburbia, IL

1 posted 2000-02-18 09:14 PM

Wow- Powerful and a bit scary. i know what you feel- sometimes things seem just terrbile but im glad ive got god to help me overcome that and im even happier thats happend to you too!!! good job!

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-02-19 12:17 PM

So glad to hear that you have joined a church and walk with God. Hope also you have come out of that vault and that life is better for you. I wrote some comments on one of your other poems. Be sure to read.
Never give up on yourself! There is a lot of beauty in the world, never stop looking!
Danny

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