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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I've known you for only a short peroid of time, but I feel as if I've known you forever. I tremble with joy at your every touch. The feel of your hand taking mine~ I want you to hold it forever. I glow with happiness every time you're near. I want you near me now~ I want to be with you forever. My knees grow weak in your loving arms. I want to stay there~ I want you to hold me forever. My body melts with every kiss you give. Just the thought of your lips on mine~ I want you to kiss me forever. My heart jups to know how much you care. Knowing that it is so much more~ I want you to love me forever. ~Kristi Lynn for Nate- we may have known each other for just a short time, but it feels like we've been together forever... |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
That's sweet. Nate's a lucky guy. If you want to walk with God, you've got to go His way! |
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Sara Junior Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 27LaCrosse WI, United States |
That is so sweet!! It's great to feel that way about someone. I did once and I know i can't wait to feel that way again. You two are lucky and I hope you'll always be happy. |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Yes, Nate is a lucky guy. I wish you two the best of luck. P.S. Kristi... that second stanza was great! I liked it a lot. Keep up the great work. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This was sooooo sweet....I really liked this one of yours. Beautiful  Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thank you for all your replies. I feel more lucky than you all say Nate is- I've never been treated this much like a princess before. This is all new to me, even after my ex and all. Jer~ I'm glad you liked my poem, and remember that I still have to compare my poetry to yours, and you're still beating me here... Kristi Lynn  |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ahhh... Kristi. There never was any competition. Everyone writes in his or her own style and maturity. I consider your work to be just as equally good as mine. That goes for everyone! I enjoy reading and replying to everyone’s work because it gives me poetic inspiration, as well as an understanding of the author. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Awwww, Jer, you're such a sweetie. Okay, no competition, but I compare my poetry to everyone's, and I usually listen to what you and jerome have to say when you comment on my poetry. I've always compared my poetry to yours- if I remember, that's how we started talking... Anyhoo, thanks again... ~Kristi Lynn  |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice poem Kristi. Heh, just becuase I don't reply to all your old poems dosn't mean I'm not trying to read them all. cuase I am, though time is the ultimate dictator in this, so old posts have to take a back seat to some things. Love ya, Samson C. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Sam~ Thank you for replying to any of my old posts. Its so sweet of you to begin with... Love ya, Kristi Lynn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice job with this one. I like the way you layed this out. It read well. I have also noticed how complimentary you are to other poets about their writing. It's nice that you read others and give such nice comments. [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Danny~ Thank you much for your sweet reply, as well as everyone else. It means a lot to know what people think of my poetry, whether it stinks or is actually really good. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
I just thought I would tell you that your poem ****ing rules and that your ****ing awesome!!! Peace Deano "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thanks Deano. I'm glad you think that about me and my poem.  Stay cool. ~Kristi Lynn |
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