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my empty life
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my empty life |
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klownkid New Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 2 |
My life is empty A never ending hole I don’t understand it I have no control I will keep falling Deeper and deeper Closer to death With in my hole The hole I dig With the anger I feel The anger inside The anger I keep Hidden away So no one will see I will never let it out It will stay locked away With no way out |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
I'm sorry about that's going on with you..I have been there before and I just wanted you to know that someone out here cares!  -~JeNnYeMeShAn~ "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I think Jennye is right. Someone out there cares. Life has it's ups and downs for everyone. We keep going because there is always a promise of a better tomorrow if we only look for the good thats there. Keep Looking and keep writing. We here will be reading. Danny |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
That is a really good poem. I think you did a really good job. Keep up the good work. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
You are a very talented poet, ya know... I love your poems so far, and look forward to seeing more. I love the fact that so far I can relate to them, even though I can't usually write them. Writing is the easiest way to express your feelings, though, isn't it? Keep your chin up, 'cuz you know you got me here for ya.... Okay, that might be a scary thought, if you ask JennyeMeshan or Sunshine17, but at least you know I care. Take care! ~Kristi Lynn  |
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