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bAbYgAl New Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 2Singapore |
Specially for teenagers to posts their poems about teenage life. Older poets are also invited to post their writings about emotions here too. |
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bAbYgAl New Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 2Singapore |
Memories Memories of yesteryears Vanished echos of my fears and tears Each and every a beautiful scene As if they belonged only in a dream Sighed whispers and lingering pains Jagged scars and forgetten names All of them belong no lest In my chamber of secrets, my treasured chest Secret crushes and my first love Tender momentos and bundled notes All things close to my heart and soul All thoughts beyond my own control These things I can only keep Locked in my heart, alone to weep |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
This is a good poem here. Keep up the good work. Gina |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hi, I like your poem. I believe we all have memories of yesteryears tucked away someplace for safe keeping, so we can revisit them in our minds. I wondered about lines 7 and 8. They fit the mood, but don't rhyme. Maybe something like: "Secret crushes and first love to know bundled notes and secret momentos" Just a suggestion. This is a nice piece. Welcome to Passions and I look forward to more of your poetry. |
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