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Teen Poetry #2

Lovely Life!

huney_mel
Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 52

0 posted 2000-03-13 01:51 AM

We have to take it carefully,
Use it the best we can,
We always try to compete,
To be much better than,
Enjoy your life how it is going,
And how beautiful you really are,
Look at all the helpless people,
Whose families are afar.
Look at all the simple things,
The grass, the trees, and the sky,
Care for everything,
Nature never lies.
Life is so precious,
Handle it with care,
And never be lonley,
Theres always someone who will share.
When the sky is blue,
Or when it is grey,
Turn to my my family and friends,
I'll lighten up your day!

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

1 posted 2000-03-13 02:10 AM

you have just had this total poetry explosian!?

four posts in a row!!!

i like this too mell......makes me thankful for everything i have, instead of hopeless for everything i don't.

luv
Bec

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

2 posted 2000-03-13 05:20 AM

i really liked your poem it shows how you veiw things little things that matter interesting!!

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 2000-03-13 10:13 PM

Very well done, very positive work here! You have a lot of talent, keep up the great work!

*Krista Knutson*

I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB

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