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The real me |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
How do I describe myself? It is an impossible task. For many walls I hide behind, As well as the many masks. My core is hidden deep, Far down within my soul. For many times it has been exposed, And pain taken it's toll. Even with the colours, You can't image the real me. The anger and the judgement, Are what people don't want to see. But I suppose that blue, Is when I'm feeling sane. And the dark, dark orange, Is when I'm feeling pain. The tears that I have shed, Upon the pillow at which I rest. Are not only ones of anguish, But are most merry ones at best. A poem is not sufficient, To describe what is hidden deep. You only see what is on the surface, For the true feelings are mine to keep. |
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KiKi Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 15 |
you took the words right out of my mouth!! very well written! I had been trying to write one like that but I was having troubles! I hope you don't mind if I print that off and put it into my poerty book! you are very talented!!! *if you love someone let them go, if they return their love was yours, if they don't their love wa never yours to begin with* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Thank you very much Kiki. I don't mind at all if you put it in your poetry book.  ~AF~ |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
your not annonymous to me I love you ej, your gorgeous and you are a beautiful person, dont put yourself down, you have many friend who all love you, im always here for you Love always MEl |
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