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Poetic Dreams
Junior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 23
Lindsa, OKlahoma United States

0 posted 1999-10-30 05:16 AM

When I was just a little girl
sittin on your knee
you always looked down on me
your eyes full of life and glee.

When I was just a young girl
sittin on your knee
you'd try to be so stern
as you looked with love at me.
When I was just a crazy teen
standing defianlty at your knee
you would laugh and look at me
and say I could be anything I wanted to be.

When I became a young woman
sitting by your knee
you told me with your eyes
how proud you were of me.
Now I'm still that silly little girl
sitting by your knee
but when you look at me
Dad who is it that you see.

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~Once it is said it can't be forgotten, but can always be forgiven~

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

1 posted 1999-10-30 03:38 PM

I really like this poem, I have always been a daddy's girl, and we have always been really close. This totally relates to the way that him and I are, so I am going to email this to him. Great job on the poem, I really liked it.

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-30 04:03 PM

Very nice...I really like this one.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 1999-10-31 01:50 AM

I also can relate to this one. I am and always will be a Daddy's girl( even being a full fledged woman with children of her own). Enjoyed the read.

Tina TT
Junior Member

since 1999-11-01

Posts 45
Victoria, Australia

4 posted 1999-11-01 05:09 AM

ah, I like the sense of continuity...
reminds me of the song "que sera sera" for some reason (??)
good poem

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~What if you slept? What if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower? And what if, when you awoke, you had that flower in your hand? Aye, what then?~

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 1999-11-03 12:10 PM

Poetic Dreams....yanno? I do exactly that to my daughter now....she's 11, and hopefully she'll become a nun, (though we're not catholic, just seems like that would be great for my emotional state in the future...LOL). This was very well thought out and written. It's tough being a teenager...it's tough growing up these days period....it's even tougher on us parents to see you kids grow and go.....nice job!

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

6 posted 1999-11-05 06:29 PM

Excellent poem, it's so true.
Feel free to read and leave a reply for my poem, The Beauty of Dreams!

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