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Never Forget
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Never Forget |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Never forget the pain in my eyes when you said you were leaving Never forget the way I cried when you said goodbye Never forget the love I gave you before you left me here Never forget the way I kissed you when you were with me Never forget the way I held you after we made love Never forget the way I looked at you when I said I loved you Never forget that I will always care for you and that I will always love you |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
you must be in a lot of pain if you loved this person so much as you say. I think he don't deserve your love, if he left you, I know it's hard to believe it, but you'll find someone else, someone better, who really deserves you. |
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Comfrey83 Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36Winchester, Mass USA |
wow, sounds like a big deal. makes me sad just reading it! but i liked the format, good job -Andy |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
This poem is about my ex-boyfriend of course, but it doesn't bother me anymore. But thanks for all your comments. |
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