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poe_32
Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-08 05:03 AM

My loneliness lingers
as the time ticks by
thinking of you
makes my time worth while

My thoughts are clouding over my mind
my day dreaming is all I ever do with my time
people try to talk to me
but I don't hear their words

Your beutiful face is all I dream of
the time I spend with you is all I think of
you are my deepest disires
your always on my mind

You make my life
so much more special
you bring joy into my sad days
when I'm not with you
my world crumbles around me

You make me smile when I frown
you are my shining sunlight
so warm and comforting
I'am so lucky to have you

You are my lover forever
my only love
a love I'd give my life for
you are my everything

**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

1 posted 2000-04-08 01:16 PM

I am so glad you have found this person and this love. It is really special, isn't it?

Lindsay

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2000-04-09 09:29 AM

Beautiful poem....do keep posting em!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

poe_32
Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

3 posted 2000-04-10 12:35 PM

Thanks for your reply Lizzie

I'm glad you like my poems, and your one of the regular people who read my poems and reply, so I thank you for taking the time to read and to reply to all of them I really appreciate it. I hope to hear from you again!!!!!

Poe

12eH7AeH6
New Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 5

4 posted 2000-04-10 01:32 AM

hey poe32!This is a great poem...Its similar to the way i feel but the only bad thing is that i don't have her...=(...but its cool that you got this girl...but keep posting...

poe_32
Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

5 posted 2000-04-10 01:58 AM

Actually I'm a girl, and this is about a guy. I guess it could be used for a guy or girl but it is a poem I will give to my next love whoever it will be. But yeah it's a poem I've written for a guy just to let you all know. Anyways, thanks for your replys!!

Poe (Jess)

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

6 posted 2000-04-10 10:39 AM

Man, I wish someone would write me a poem like this! Very beautiful, I loved it. Hope everything works out for you. Peace!

*~Meredith~*

*There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

Thomas Jono
Junior Member

since 2000-03-30

Posts 25

7 posted 2000-04-10 02:02 PM

i liked this poem...it shows strong feelings towards another and it has touched me....thanks for sharing this with us and i hope to see some other of your work here...looking forward to it...

from
Thomas Jono

poe_32
Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

8 posted 2000-04-10 04:00 PM

Thanks guys for your comments, I'm really glad you liked this poem. I hope for the same thing meridith, I can't wait till I find that special someone to share my life with. But like I always say, love requires patience. Thanks for your replys!

Poe (Jess)

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