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Zombie Man
Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 52
Va

0 posted 1999-11-02 09:16 PM

YOU HAVE A HEART AND SO DO I
YOU FEEL PAIN AND SO DO I
YOU SHOW LOVE TO OTHERS
WHILE I DON'T..
YOU HAVE TONS OF LOVE
WHILE I DON'T....
I TRY SO HARD TO SHOW MY LOVE
BUT I CAN'T
WHY AM I THIS WAY
WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME
I TRY SO HARD TO DO THE RIGHT THING
I GIVE ALL THAT I HAVE TO BE NICE TO OTHERS
BUT ITS JUST SO HARD TO DO
BUT I DO KNOW THIS
I MAY NOT SHOW MY LOVE TO YOU THAT MUCH
BUT DEEP DOWN INSIDE OF ME
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
WORDS JUST DON'T SAY HOW MUCH
ONLY MY ACTIONS
SHOW HOW MUCH I DO
CAUSE I FOUND OUT THAT I HAVE A HEART
AND YOU HAVE SHOWED ME HOW TO USE IT
FIND A HIDDEN PART OF ME
A SIDE THAT I NEVER KNEW I HAD
A PART OF ME THAT ALL SHALL SEE
A PART THAT SHOWS THE LOVE BETWEEN YOU ......
AND ME.............

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 1999-11-02 11:10 PM

I believe that actions speak louder then words. Just know that the words are nice to hear from time to time. If I haven't said this earlier I am sorry. Welcome to Passions!

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

2 posted 1999-11-03 11:46 PM

very nice... and I know where you are coming from. It sux to know how you feel but not be able to tell anyone.... I like this poem and can't wait to hear more!

JEBE
Junior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 32
WILMINGTON, NC, USA

3 posted 1999-11-04 11:33 AM

Way cool how you just jump mout there and throw your feeings to the world..

maybe some metaphors thrown in there will make it more ..i don't know just more i guess...keep it up...JEBE

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-11-04 07:44 PM

This is wonderful...to know that someone you love has become your light.....very nice...

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kari
Member

since 1999-10-03

Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

5 posted 1999-11-04 08:42 PM

You did a very nice job dipicting how some people act towards others. I know a lot of people who can't show their feelings very well. Nicely done! Keep it up.

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