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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Smile dear friend cause I love you more when you smile frowning makes me sad for I know you are down A smile can make everything more brighter makes the sun shine when clouds are up above A smile can show who you really are inside if your fake or if you are a great person A smile characterizes who we are the smile is a part of us and a smile can make me smile Smiling can be done to please others or can show your having fun a smile appears every time a good joke is told or when a friend does something silly Smiling is good for you so never frown show that the world can't bring you down |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a nice light piece Poe. Lots of truth in it. good work. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Nice piece! Smiling is my favorite thing to do. Good work! sKiTtLeS~ :> "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Very nice poem, Poe! Every sentiment so true too...beautifully expressed! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
I love to smile!! Good work!! rachel |
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