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My Dearest Dad
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My Dearest Dad |
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GAngel2212 Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 21 |
The pain I am feeling now The hurt of you being gone I hope I will overcome my obstacles, but without you I dont know how I want to hear your voice again rejoicing like a song. You were always there for me Through thick and thin, loose or win When I was down you picked me up again With you, right now, is where I want to be. We've had so many good times togther Traveling here and there You will always be with me forever Though the lose of you I cannot bear. I wish that you'd be able to see me on my Wedding Day The hurt I'm feeling now is very hard to say Right now its gloomy, dark, and gray But if you were here, it would be a sunny day. Dad, I cannot stand alone I need your hand to hold I want to see your smile I dont want to see the cold. I have so many memories of you Pictures, trips, Elroy stories and more Right now I'm feeling blue I am broken and my heart is torn. I'm sorry for all the calls I hadn't returned I'm sorry for all the fights This will be the hardest day that I have ever learned. I'm sorry for saying I was too busy I wish I saw you instead I'm sorry for not seeing you on all the holidays I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry. I'm sorry for being so greedy I'm sorry for yelling at you I'm sorry for not coming to see you But now its too late and already through. I wish that you could have lived with me Until this dying day Every night before I go to sleep For you, I will surley pray. I wish that I could touch you I wish you were alive I wish I could have told you again I love you and good-bye. I love you Dad Always and forever Please look down on me Dad So we will never tether. When my day comes, Hopefully not for a while We will all be together In the magic land. **ELISSA** **AKA: GAngel2212** |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
How tragic for you to lose your father...I am extremely sorry and offer my condolences for your loss. This is a lovely poem and I'm sure your dad holds nothing against you and is looking down on you now. If you ever wanna talk, my email is: [email protected] Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Wow! I am speechless. This is an excellent poem. I am sorry for your loss. Writing poetry is a great way to vent some feelings. I hope each and everyday will bring a little sunshine your way. Lindsay  |
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