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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
You This new feeling, It scares me. This new feeling, It intrigues me. This new feeling, It confuses me. This new feeling, Is you. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
short but oh so sweet. Good job. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Pretty much the same as Sam said.... short but sweet. Nice. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
I understand your poem all to well. When I met my now boyfriend, I felt that same way. And to tell you the truth I kinda still do but that's because mystery between two people is good sometimes. Keep up the good work. Gina |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Your poem bears testimony to the fact that so much emotion can be captured in so few words. Great job!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
CUTE!!  |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
i've never quite heard feelings brought to a point so expressly. i think it's great. |
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