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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Everyone knows, I'm falling. Deeper and deeper, Each tyme I see him. They mention his name, And I smile uncontrollably. I just can’t control, How fast I'm falling. (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Well, Tamma. I can feel the excitement in this one, you express the feeling of uncontrollable want in this well. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Tamma, can tell your smiling from this~~~ hope the fall has a soft landing. dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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