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Teen Poetry #2
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Amy J. Renz
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 26
Newark, NJ, USA
0 posted 1999-11-06 11:52 PM

I gave it all up for you
Little wonder, you don't
Give up anything for anyone
You seem to be open
But really your locked
Tight as a vault
Nothing gets out
And nothing gets in
Not air
Not love
Not me.
© Copyright 1999 Amy J. Renz - All Rights Reserved
Laura Mitchell
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
1 posted 1999-11-07 08:41 AM

nice poem...very well written!
April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
2 posted 1999-11-08 12:05 PM

Oh so true of so many people. Almost makes you feel sorry for them, doesn't it? A very well written poem...I like it because it is so real, I guess. Keep 'em coming!
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