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Teen Poetry #2
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MrHat
Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 34
Gilroy, Ca
0 posted 2000-05-09 01:21 AM

I sing
My siren song
Alone at night
I long
For someone to hug
Embrace
Release the pain
From my soul
My being
Unknown things
to me
fill me
till I burst
Alone
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anonymousfemale
Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2000-05-09 04:21 AM

Mr Hat:
This piece written in only a few words gives a perfect understanding of the meaning 'alone' and what emotions it brings.

Good work.

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry
Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
2 posted 2000-05-10 12:42 PM

mm.. a lonely poem.. well written..

Lynne
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