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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
always so caught up in my anger.. showed me the real meaning of danger and i died with thunder and sleet ..my grave showed me whats it like to become complete and such a neat and storied rhythm for slavery to the brink of beginning... |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
Jackal- Very short and cryptic, however I like the words you've chosen. The first three lines of your poem are relatively straight forward... Anger is destructive and dangerous... But I'd like to hear your interpretation of the last lines. Slave to anger? Slave to death? ...Daysleeper... "Presently I've had enough of all your sanity." -James Kavanaugh |
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