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Teen Poetry #2
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CSwtThng
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since 1999-07-28
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0 posted 2000-05-11 12:16 PM


Falling

I feel I'm falling down so low
Falling, don't know where to go

In this darkness, will I rise
Back up to their watchful eyes

Watching every move I make
I pray the Lord my soul to take

To take me far away from here
To a place without such fear

Someone please set me free
Can't they all just let me be
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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2000-05-11 12:41 PM

Nice writing CSwtThng. This piece is simple yet highlights the emotions that a person has to deal with in times of need.

Good work.

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry
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