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Michelle New Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 9 |
I found this is my little sisters room...its about our parents divorce. If friends are always there, shoulndn't parents be too? They say the'll always be forever, and that forever never ends, Then dad comes in and breaks the promise by saying, "I'm leaving" and he forgets all of us and his promise. Mom acts like nothing happened, Big sis says not to cry and little bro doesn't understand. Am I the only one who cares about this family? Dads got a girlfriend, who knows what they do. Marriage is a commitment of love, well at least thats what I have been taught. I guess mom and dad didnt love each other Well at least not enough, to keep this family together. So dont believe when people say forever, because forever isnt what they mean. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
The dreaded double post strikes again!!!! BTW: This is an amazing poem, ironic that such beauty comes from such utter tragedy. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Oh....how horribly sad that your sis should feel like that. I hope she allows herself to trust again when the time is right. This is a beautiful poem... Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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