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Would anyone care?
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the dark angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37 |
What would happen if I died? Would the world stop? Or would anyone even realise? Would the days pass by as though I was alive or would they take a moment from time to say their goodbyes? But I guess I'd know if I died How good my friends were and if they cried when they learned I had died some would care and some would not but I care because I don't wanna be forgot |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Someone would care if you died, that's for sure. There's always someone that cares, and you would not be forgotten. Good writing. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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tawny Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 14 |
something we all think about but rarely say. well put, to the point. know that someone will always be there to remember |
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Mike's_Hot_LiL_Angel New Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 2 |
WOW!  that was a very intense poem!  i liked it lotz! Even though it was very heart breaking!!! <3 Ya know i think everyone wonders about that! i know i do! but even though it may seem like no one cares someone does! just remember this saying!* Someone somewhere dreams of your and the though of u makes their life worthwile..so when u feel all lonely and blue remember someone somewhere is thinking of you!!!* that is so true!!! *smile always* it makes ya feel better* always malyssa |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
Very good poem, you express the thoughts of many. I liked how you worded it, and i can relate to it. Excellent poem! |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Beautiful, but depressing. Well said, but harsh-heard. Just remember that there are many people that count on you, wether you know it or not, plenty of these people you haven't met yet, pontetial friends, lovers, you name it. This is your life, cherish it, its the only one you get. |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
This is a question everyone ponders in their life, you have put it into some great words dark angel. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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snowgirl17 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 20Cloquet,Mn |
Wow nice poem it hard to think about not everyone rembering you but live life as if it were your last day good writing keep it up!!! Lane C. |
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