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Teen Poetry #2

The Safe Garden

LinaInverse
Junior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 18

0 posted 1999-11-08 12:30 PM

When I am mad
I goto my garden
nothing bad goes on in there
Trees, flowers ,and butterflys
And even glorious swans swim there ,
Only god can create such wonders ,
So everytime I get mad ,
I thank god for his/her helpful hanf

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

1 posted 1999-11-08 03:32 PM

Sounds good! I think you made a slight typo with the last word. I think it should read hand.

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