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Teen Poetry #2

Dreamer

the dark angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 37

0 posted 2000-05-23 07:37 AM

If dreams weren't dreams
and dreams came true
then I wouldn't be stuck here
I'd be there with you.

But no matter
however far we are apart.
Don't ever fear
you are always in my heart

Haroon
New Member

since 2000-05-23

Posts 7

1 posted 2000-05-23 10:11 AM

short but sweet.
good work

aussie_princesss
Junior Member

since 2000-05-17

Posts 15
Australia

2 posted 2000-05-23 10:15 AM

Nice poem. This poem applies to me in some ways.
Rhiannon

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2000-05-23 03:24 PM

Ah, I can relate to this very <b>VERY</b> well. Great job.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

5 posted 2000-05-23 03:48 PM

Ibolele, my friend....so don't give up on that dream....either it will come true or something more beautiful beyond your wildest dreams will come true. Lovely lil poem.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Matchstick McGee
Junior Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 26
Austin, Texas

6 posted 2000-05-23 05:31 PM

I love a well written short poem. It's so easy to carry around with you in your heart. Very well done.

-Matchstick

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