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The american nightmare...
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The american nightmare... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
and it runs through your head the same every day your job is a bore your in love with the hate your wife has the ice...running in her veins your kids look the same..they are lost in their money..pigskin wallets how ironic life is brutal but intensely funny and they dont hear or care they are just part of the american nightmare and you really shouldnt be so picky i wouldnt be so concerned its the dawn of everything living..and soon it will be your turn "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" "I am too connected to you to Slip away, to fade away. Days away I still feel you Touching me, changing me, And considerately killing me." The Jackal |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Great title, drew me like free food! How sick are we? Well, this piece about sums it up. "Advanced Social Structure", What a joke. Yeah, well nice work cuz... ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wow... I'll admit, America isn't as great as most people think it is, but there are worse places on this earth... good poem "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
That doesn't only happen in america...it's human life. Great poem on hopelessness...very cynical...i like it. I also like your signatures. Lani |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
I love this poem...this would be a great song if there was verses to go with it...wow...I just love it  |
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